THEME: BARK

Entry: Free

Prizes: £100 (first place), £75 (second place), £50 (third place), £25 (fourth place)

We gave the members of The Globe Soup Members-Only Group the task of writing 100 words on the theme: BARK.

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Finalists:

Felipe Orlans, NC Maha, Joan Bullion El Faghloumi, Sarah Kennedy, Lily Steinberg, Peter Rehn, Alice Shaw, N. Modipane, Sarah Heald, Sonia Haddad, Kimberley Silverthorne, Sumaira Ahmed, Lin Whitehouse, Holly Grover Brandon, Caroline Mckenzie, Zarah Elouis-Ro, Rhian Yoshikawa, Hanne Lisa Sampson, Anita Heket, Johnson Matandi, Angela Huskisson, Robert Burns, Ray Tilma, Meg Fargher, Ann McGonnell, Suzanne Pherigo, Farheen Faisal, Shahina Rahman, Kelli Johnson, Lizzie Logemann, Alexa Clauson, Sharon Murphy, Julie Turland, Val Roberts, Olivia Todd, Elizabeth Sloughter, Pamela Gough, Cage Dunn, Lois Benton, Wendy Markel, Karen Walker, Nelly Shulman, Suma Jayachandar, S L Jones, Madeleine Armstrong, Jessica Martel, Michael Crouch, Debbie Kay, Deborah Sale-Butler.

Top-Tier Finalists:

Dave Klotzkin, K. L. Mill, Claire Knight,  Moby Barker, Lisa H. Owens, Maddie Logemann, Chloe Hor, Sam Payne, Chris Sadhill.

  1. First Place:

    You Shouldn’t Have

    By Lydia Morsman

    Potpourri. On our twentieth anniversary, Barry gets me lavender, pinecones, and bark.
    His excuse? Head’s not in the game—Mum passed away.

    Yeah, yeah. Hardly unexpected—old Nicotine Fingers ran out of puff, barked and spluttered her way to Heaven. ‘Jesus, darlin’, got a light?’

    Potpourri. A wicker casket of dust and funeral flowers. Cheap crap. What I gave her for Christmas. She deserved it—squandered our inheritance on Superkings and scratch cards.

    Wait…

    Potpourri. The very same I gave her. Different giftbox. Same lavender, pinecones, and bark… same oleander. Different gift tag—yours forever, Barry x

    My throat itches.


  2. Second Place:

    Second Born

    By Verity Dunbar

    You howl at skinned knee,

    Badly bumped head,

    Cry – high and long -

    From cold, lonely bed.

    You bark at your brother

    Who barks back in your face.

    Spittle and teeth; back in your place.

    You whine over dinner

    Then chirp at dessert.

    Whimper and wail

    Into folds of my skirt.

    You bleat tidying up,

    Protests bellow through the house,

    Then snort great sobs on the sleeve of my blouse.

    You whinny, whicker,

    Hee-haw and hoot

    Hide-and-seeking in the garden;

    No tears, no dispute.

    In time, you’ll growl, grunt -

    No longer a child. 

    Formidable. Second born. Second son. Wild. 

  3. Third Place:

    Patterns

    By Sean Thomas McDonnell

    Danny walked up to the tree and placed his hand on the burl. “Looks like a mouth, don’t it?”

    Peter shrugged. “Not really.”

    “Sure it does—and look, up above it. Those two bumps in the bark look like closed eyes. Like any second they could open.”

    Peter walked over and poked one of the knots with his finger; the husk parted, a glassy eye shot a glance.

    Danny threw a coin at its convex iris.

    Peter hacked at its roots with his brother’s pocket knife.

    The neighbors came barking and fed the tree rocks until its eyes closed forever.

  4. Fourth Place:

    BlackBox

    By Jay McKenzie

    Grandpa is my co-pilot. 

    We fly cardboard planes across lazy summers where bees kiss ice lollies and the sky barks hot-belched summer storms overhead. Aim high, he says while we make continents out of flowerbeds, oceans out of puddles. 

    Today, we’re flying to where Grandpa taught Dad how to fly. Tomorrow, we’ll scratch our shins on the bark of the red cedar that was the control tower and see Grandpa fly solo. On my lap, the black box, stuffed with fragments of us dipping between cracks in the clouds and the stars, and Grandpa’s last flight as my co-pilot.

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