THEME: DECEPTION

Entry: Free

Prize: £100

We gave the members of The Globe Soup Members-Only Group the task of writing 100 words on the theme: DECEPTION.

The following entries are Globe Soup’s top picks (in no particular order). Scroll down to see who the group chose as their winner.

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  1. The Grimwades

    By Beatrice Hussain

    Where lug worms of rancour cast about

    And leaps of faith were dashed by doubt;

    Lord Grimwade dived for mother of pearl like 

    Moonlight on a gambolling fox, and brought 

    A fragment to his girl; as being broody had made 

    Her soft.  With any doubts outgrown and sloughed,

    They made their heronry in a concrete strut, 

    Beneath a jut of ocean road. 

    Where ropes of foam swung in and out

    Their leggy fledglings skipped about.

    While Lady Grimwade, with one wing doffed,

    Like a weeping ash,

    Shaded a gravel path for eels, 

    To scoff the lot with a splash.

  2. Battles

    By Marie-Louise McGuinness

    The mistrust emanating from her darkened stare made my skin prickle. Though guilty, I stood unyielding, I had too much to lose.

    Excruciating moments followed. Ragged sighs gusted from cheeks pink with accusation; delicate jaw gurning, chewing on emotional cud.

    I met her eyes, unblinking, and repeated the lie.

    An exaggerated nod and half-hearted door-slam marked her resignation. 

    She had no proof.

    The last chocolate bar, spongy from sticky body heat, remained victoriously sequestered within my waistband.

    I would not surrender it to my toddler. Her tantrums were escalating and I needed the sugar hit more than she did.

  3. Sleight of Hand

    By Kim Russell

    November sun slants low, cold, 

    white gold,

    casts flickering shadows across 

    fields of frost,

    prettifying furrows and hedges

    around the edges

    where icy fingers have bejewelled

    weeds with icy dew.

    A sleight of hand - a hare appears 

    with backlit ears,

    zig-zagging its way home, not slowing,

    ears pink and glowing.

    Nature is a magician, 

    no mad hatter,

    weaving spells with equinoctial scatter

    on the season’s horizon.

    She flies the hare in the autumn moon,

    a silver balloon

    bobbing above trees in déshabillé,

    except for the silvery

    tangles of moonbeams –

    or so it seems.

  4. The Feet

    By Dominique Gracia

    They weren’t finished. First, Prometheus didn’t notice, and then he thought it was funny.

    They emerged from the kiln like alabaster twins and took their first breaths together. Then Prometheus’ statue walked away with her maker, and Dolos’ stared at him, stuck.

    Whenever Aletheia was still, he sketched her ivory toes, moulded high arches. From the kiln they came, beautiful and fresh, to stand beside Dolos’ statue on her pedestal. For hours each day, he stroked and coaxed, but could not make them fit.

    And that is how the god Deception came to worship the feet of the goddess Truth.

  5. Foraging

    By Becky Gregory

    Mary had been sent to forage, 

    for their tea she went. 

    To find a plant so pungent 

    and distinctive in its scent. 

    She trudged deep into the forest,

    up t’ rundown mill.

    Searching for that speck of white,

    o’er rock and tree and hill.

    At last she spotted its clear flower,

    whiter than the snow.

    So gathered it in handfuls,

    tasting on the go.

    Soon young Mary felt unwell;

    she had been deceived.

    For lily of the valley

    looks like wild garlic indeed.

  6. Spring’s Promise

    By Bean Sawyer

    She pushed her way through soil. Past fossil, bone and worm; remembering the way, guided by a promise. Her birth was as swift as her previous death; a life once measured by golden petals and the rhymic turning of the sky.

    She was right on time. Greeted by birdsong, boxing hares and barking fox; the signposts for her to unfold. 

    She lifted her yellow trumpet to the sky. Untamed, it still wore a winter cloak with lungs as deep as pockets- breath as cold as steel. 

    Her neck bent with its touch, her brief life crushed by spring’s broken promise.

  7. The Venus Fly Trap

    By Helen Dudley

    Dionaea Muscipula, damsel of deceit.

    Maleficence sonambular, her lures so bittersweet.

    With doilied petal bonnet, poised on graceful spine,

    Her serenity belies a secret, beauty undermined.

     

    Tiny hairs on nectared tongue, in yawning, needled maws,

    Spring waiting to be sprung to death in emerald jaws.

     

    The unsuspecting housefly, or errant worker ant,

    Unaware of what will lie within this temptress plant:

    Nectar sweet, beneath their feet, hair-triggered fatal trap;

    In seeking out a tasty treat, they became her midday snack!

The group chose ‘Battles’ as their favourite. Congratulations to Marie-Louise McGuinness!

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